(08-10-2012, 08:34 PM)NUG Wrote:

(08-10-2012, 06:13 PM)Miguel Wrote: When she raps, it should be from the female perspective. It would make the song more cohesive than the original. The rapid-fire pace of rapping could be used to convey excitement. Something like "Now that you're here" in rap form.

Exactly - I was thinking something with attitude from her own perspective. She could change it up over the years when she performs.

Quote:I know he’s going to brag,
Pretend I’m just a shag ..

the true story is that I'm playing him like a fiddle..
.that’s the answer to the riddle
that’s not rotten to the middle -

yes I'll say it
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The Story be told ,
Story’s got a heart of gold
for if I be so bold..

I'll SAY IT-
I know it

We’ve got love within this passshuun
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Of course he might not even see it,
Surely too afraid to admit it,
because boys minds’ in that area that are really full of:,
--
... uh oh
I shouln’t go low,
…but – oh my!
…. i'm happy when he does so,

And….. vice versaaaah

In Fasssshun……….

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I 'm not going to blush .
I’ll take what loving that he’s given :
with Love: boys aren't in a rush.
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One day they’ll be some sanity.
See I’m not a vanity,
wake up alone feeling like a low-life
knowing that there is more to humanity

he’ll think about his mom an see me as an entity
... Finally and consequentially,
seeing the inevitability:
……………………….dream of life's possibilities
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and then,
yes
finally then………….
We’ll Comit
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You see, that’s how it is and knowing that I'm right.
Its not a sorry sight

to let him strut a bit,
strut a bit

I’ll let him pay for dinner,
I’ll be a willing sinner…

And you know whaaat? ?
I think he's sexy too and
And He’s not the only one that liiiiiikes IT!

And he’s seeexeh

Yo yo Tommy Boi, I aint sad,
Not too bad for a suburban Dad...
But slow down homie, you aint that slick,
thinkin' down low is fo yo dick...
Clevuh fo' sho bro, but ya gotta know,
Hales aint yo ho so ya betta go slow...
But yo wigga, nice work at keepin it real,
So keep on truckin' - 5 hearts for this deal!

(08-10-2012, 10:57 PM)LovinDaHaley Wrote:

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Yo yo Tommy Boi, I aint sad,
Not too bad for a suburban Dad...
But slow down homie, you aint that slick,
thinkin' down low is fo yo dick...
Clevuh fo' sho bro, but ya gotta know,
Hales aint yo ho so ya betta go slow...
But yo wigga, nice work at keepin it real,
So keep on truckin' - 5 hearts for this deal!

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