(08-10-2012, 08:34 PM)NUG Wrote: (08-10-2012, 06:13 PM)Miguel Wrote: When she raps, it should be from the female perspective. It would make the song more cohesive than the original. The rapid-fire pace of rapping could be used to convey excitement. Something like "Now that you're here" in rap form.
Exactly - I was thinking something with attitude from her own perspective. 
She could change it up over the years when she performs.
OH Dear
.. are youready for a suburban Dad to take a stab at writing a rap for a 20 year old girl ?
(this is going to be miserable
But, you’ve probably sensed by now that I’ll take a stab at thoughts I shouldn’t)
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Quote:I know he’s going to brag,
Pretend I’m just a shag ..
the true story is that I'm playing him like a fiddle..
.that’s the answer to the riddle
that’s not rotten to the middle -
yes I'll say it
--
The Story be told ,
Story’s got a heart of gold
for if I be so bold..
I'll SAY IT-
I know it
We’ve got love within this passshuun
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Of course he might not even see it,
Surely too afraid to admit it,
because boys minds’ in that area that are really full of:,
--
... uh oh
I shouln’t go low,
…but – oh my!
…. i'm happy when he does so,
And….. vice versaaaah
In Fasssshun……….
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I 'm not going to blush .
I’ll take what loving that he’s given :
with Love: boys aren't in a rush.
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One day they’ll be some sanity.
See I’m not a vanity,
wake up alone feeling like a low-life
knowing that there is more to humanity
he’ll think about his mom an see me as an entity
... Finally and consequentially,
seeing the inevitability:
……………………….dream of life's possibilities
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and then,
yes
finally then………….
We’ll Comit
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You see, that’s how it is and knowing that I'm right.
Its not a sorry sight
to let him strut a bit,
strut a bit
I’ll let him pay for dinner,
I’ll be a willing sinner…
And you know whaaat? ?
I think he's sexy too and
And He’s not the only one that liiiiiikes IT!
And he’s seeexeh
