"Undone" - The Mourning Song

[Halien Grandma]

In the "Inspiring Others" thread, I linked to an anti-drunk-driving video that uses Undone in its soundtrack. I commented that with some tweaks, "Undone might speak to those who are grieving."

This is my attempt at a rewrite:

Verse 1

I’m sorry I’m really a mess right now
I’m trying my best to get it together somehow
I can’t see this way, locked up in this pain that you left me
I’m unraveling, looking for things that’ll never be

Pre Chorus

Stars fade away, they just crash into space
Disappear from the night like you and I

Chorus

Tell me where love goes when it’s gone
Tell me how hearts keep goin’on
Suddenly someone is no one, I’ve come undone
Undone, undone
Undone, undone, undone

Verse 2:

I’m sorry, it’s so hard to say goodbye.
I can’t erase you or forget you, so how will I survive
You’re the hand I can’t hold, the words I’m not told when I’m lonely
If I can’t have you back, I just want to have what you took from me.

Pre Chorus

Stars fade away, they just crash into space
Disappear from the night like you and I

Chorus

Tell me where love goes when it’s gone
Tell me how hearts keep goin’on
Suddenly someone is no one, I’ve come undone
Undone, undone
Undone, undone, undone

Bridge:

I’ll come around again I know it’s not the end
But right now I’ve got nowhere to begin,
To begin

Chorus:
Tell me where love goes when it’s gone
Tell me how hearts keep goin’on
Suddenly someone is no one, I’ve come undone
Undone, undone

Nothing but emptiness inside
Love leaves a black hole when it dies
How can I ever love again? I’ve come undone
Undone, undone
Undone, undone, undone
Undone, undone

Well done, Miguel! After today's horrendous tragedy, I was easily moved to tears when I read your re-write.